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Re: Love Gone Forever
This was very.... well there is no word for it. I can see that you tried to make it flow, but in some areas it it just didn't flow at ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: English II Pre-Ap Essay
A Biography on George Eastman George Eastman was a great inventor. He is known as the “Father of Popular Photography,” bringing photography to the mainstream. If not for him, we ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Now Introducing Featured Works To Your Profile
that is awesome. you are great thanks Nate :D
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Guilty Pleasures.
You have awesome descriptions, and very good grammar. I have to agree with KJ, and say that it was a bit confusing at some point. Other than that, you have ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Fall In Love... Just Not Apart
I loved this. It was very good. "If you're gonna fall in love... Do this for me; and if you're gonna dream... Don't ever leave. And if you're gonna kiss ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Kill me (because our love hurts)
I loved this poem. It's awesome. You are really good. :D
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: The Secret
As I was reading over my story. I realized that I started a lot of paragraphs with ''I'' and thought that it was really annoying. Sorry about that. I will ...
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Footsteps of a broken stranger
Wow! I absolutely loved this. It was a tad bit repetitive, but I love what you were saying. Very beautiful. " Every rain drop that falls from this broken sky ...
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Yeah, this should not be under lyrics. It was my first time posting, and I accidentally put it in the wrong place. *Oops* MadHatter- I get what you are saying, ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Forest Lament
Loved it! This is really good :D 'Neath the whispering trees And the light of each new day There my heart forever keeps My song when I am away. I ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Castle Falls v2
I really liked how the light reflected off the painting. I also love how you can see the texture. :D
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: In the Deep Blue - Chap. 1 (Edited)
"The sunset, Sweeps across the sky. Its beauty, None can define. All the colors, Too numerous to name. The sunset appears every day, And never is the same. So wild, ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: In the Deep Blue - Chap. 1 (Edited)
I like this story. A few lines here, and there that could use some tweaking. Example: "I've decided that walking through the halls in this high school is torture. Some ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: To Heed My Word
"Now listen very closely to the things that I will say For the sky is sort of silky, smooth; a silent loving grey, The perfect time for telling all the ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Kevin Scholler
I loved the detail and the shading in this drawing :) I think it's awesome.
Mar 5, 2008